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To Know Each Other

I see the windows open wide and wonder what could be inside, but time is slow and we don't speak. I could ask you why I catch you often gazing upon me and then begin to soften, but I am too afraid of something I can't identify. It could be you unfamiliar personality and features or it could be the nasty, hiding, fearsome creatures that live inside my head and tease me all the time. Of course it could just truly not be the right time of perhaps this mountain we must now climb, but probably it is the invisible wall sitting here. Oh how I loathe that invisible wall all day it prevents us from saying what we wish to say, but it could be you and me letting fear win. We should not let fear win like that and speak what is in the hat so we may know each other.

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Date: 5/13/2016 11:45:00 PM
elizabeth, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:55:00 AM
Elizabeth, welcome to poetry soup, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:23:00 AM
"Hi Elizabeth, Welcome to poetry soup. It is a nice platform to express ur views through poem. It is said that "The arc of love and affection always bends to form a circle of contentment". Here we are tied with a relation of friendship.We are encouraging each other to improve confidence.It is nice to have a friend like u. Wish u a fruitful journey ahead. Take care.......hugs.""
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:23:00 AM
Elizabeth, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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