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To Jim

Up and down we go. A depressive state but you seem to love the verbal flow. You laugh and say my ornateness makes me rhyme. I will leave you a kiss when I say goodbye. Metaphorical you are. You are the great philosopher. High-strung and low-keyed is your talk. I will be the first to walk. It is just plain to see when love is not to be. Although great as sex partners, I do not want to be free. You seem to be objective to a f*** and not real to love. When I say goodbye, no tears do I have to cry. Of course, mountains I will climb. Peak an incline to suppress my desires. "Do we have a chance?" I know this is a question you will never ask. "Is it for sure that our partnership ends?" I want more Jim. ____________________________| PENNED ON SEPTEMBER 04, 2014! This poem is based on the following theme: "Leave you a kiss"

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 9/17/2014 4:33:00 AM

A very well written piece of work, nicely expressed! Thank you Verlana for your participation in my contest and Congrats on your win! love..

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/17/2014 7:22:00 AM

Thanks for your congratulations Gautami... Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/14/2014 10:57:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/14/2014 11:18:00 PM

Thanks for congrats Dr. Ram.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/14/2014 7:28:00 PM

Congratulations Verlena on your win. I enjoyed reading it but am saddened that it IS sometimes hard to get out of such relationships. It seems Our love, or good sex makes us put up with to many down times.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/14/2014 8:27:00 PM

Excellent feedback Brenda. Thanks for the congratulations. Verlena

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/14/2014 6:19:00 PM

Sometimes leaving is good. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/14/2014 6:31:00 PM

Thanks Joyce for your congratulations. Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 9/14/2014 1:56:00 PM

deep provocative write Verlena many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/14/2014 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Jan on your congratulations. Verlena

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/14/2014 12:51:00 PM

I enjoyed your winning poem. Congratulations and God bless you. Happy writing and love and prayers, Gina

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/14/2014 3:42:00 PM

Thanks Gina for your congratulations... Verlena

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/7/2014 2:44:00 AM

I do not desire sex without love, the two must be united for me, I empathize with you Verlena. Although you do not elaborate on your personality in this poem, oddly, you two seem inspired by eachother. You do a great job of conveying the pain of disillusionment, and expressing your wants Verlena...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/7/2014 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Justin for seeing through the vagueness I present. However, this is not a personal experience directly. Only indirectly does this exist. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2014 10:07:00 AM

Sometimes we just need a good F*** and if we find love in the process that is the ultimate prize. I enjoyed this provocative write Verlena.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/5/2014 12:33:00 PM

In the meantime Rick, I want to be love to. Provocative, well that is probably true. Sending a smile, Verlena.