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She wept and sobbed till her lungs were sore, but not a single soul realised. Further and further down she sinks, but no one knows yet a single thing. How much more could she take? How much more till she's free? From these chains that bound her down ever so forcibly? She screamed out loud, with all her might; No one heard, not one tried. When comes one who would be, always there no matter what may be?

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Date: 1/19/2016 12:45:00 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU POST AGAIN...SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:19:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem - I wish you luck with many more poems - A pleasure to meet you here, Kai Lun :) - Best wishes // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2015 12:00:00 PM
Hi Kai, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/2/2015 11:53:00 AM
Kai, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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