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To Him Who I Hate -Round 2

The ring meant everything- Oh wait… it was your moms. The vow meant eternity- Oh oops… it was Vegas we were drunk. Your love meant sacrifice- Oh right…you cheated many times. I was your number one fan, Oh wait...that was your hand! *Dedicated to Him Who I Hate*

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Date: 10/21/2012 3:08:00 PM
Oh shizzle his hand was his number one fan. Very damaging to his self esteem. Very funny. Total knock out blow.
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Date: 10/10/2012 12:36:00 AM
Don't let the thought of him last. Expunge him; he is a thing of the past.
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Monique Brandt
Date: 10/10/2012 12:43:00 AM
I know! You are right- why is it so much easier to put up a fight?
Date: 10/9/2012 12:21:00 AM
Ah! Good verse! only remember, if you hold on to the hate, he wins... Cynthia
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Monique Brandt
Date: 10/9/2012 1:10:00 AM
Great reminder Cynthia! I do appreciate the feedback and take it to heart. *Monique
Date: 10/8/2012 10:24:00 PM
wow.... a powerful round...love it...pd
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