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To Fault

self made disaster inner dialogue too loud to see the light ***

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/21/2018 6:39:00 PM

Love "inner dialog too loud," sometimes I have arguments with myself - hard to say if I won or lost-

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/22/2018 8:25:00 AM

Giggles! Thankya ;) xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/19/2018 5:36:00 AM

You nailed my feeling level.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/19/2018 6:30:00 AM

An "ouch" with love. xomo!

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 7/17/2018 3:04:00 PM

Light fits inside of darkness. Thanks for the dedication : )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/17/2018 3:30:00 PM

I like that :) xomo!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2018 6:18:00 PM

Interesting work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/15/2018 10:31:00 PM

Thank you Sara :) xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2018 6:25:00 PM

A pearl of wisdom in this one!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/13/2018 8:13:00 PM

Grit long time churned; success! <3

Mick Talbot

Date: 7/12/2018 10:44:00 AM

Many a time I should have kept my mouth shut, still, haven't learned! You most definitely hit the nail on the head, Mick

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/12/2018 12:28:00 PM

So I says to myself, "stop saying that self! You're your own worst enemy. Are you listening?"... ;) xomo!

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/12/2018 2:47:00 AM

You got that right! Good one, Mo:)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/12/2018 8:12:00 AM

Really, really, nearly the death of me... and may be yet ;p xomo!

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 7/12/2018 1:20:00 AM

Concise and acute as always.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/12/2018 8:11:00 AM

You're too kind and I'll take it. xomo ;)

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/12/2018 12:31:00 AM

Sounds all too familiar, Maureen. Line xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/12/2018 8:00:00 AM

Literally nearly the death of me ;) but I figured this piece would do better without explanation (lol) xomo!

Anil Deo

Date: 7/12/2018 12:23:00 AM

Maureen, this is so wonderfully, truly, Zen! In my CHRIST-ian prayer workshops, I cannot help teaching one session on "FAST FOOD; SLOW THINKING." great senryu on accessing the SPACE of God (which I call the Canvas of Consciosuness, copyright someone else -yet we're PATENT-ly One.Shalom, shalom. We share Joys of maturing as poets.Thanx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/12/2018 8:09:00 AM

The Zen of hindsight ;) thank you Anil! I am honoured. I love your wit my friend, and your support is a blessing for which I am greatly appreciative. Thank you again :)) xomo!