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Pale and fair, she will sit awhile She's a fragile lily, but not a child who climbs across the wooden stile to seek her private solitude The willow pond, is her second home She'll while away these lonely hours with dragonflies, and buttercups, mossy stones, and fragrant flowers She picks bouquets of hufflewinks of yellow, blue, and blushing pink Then adds a cattail to the mix with baby's breath, and bright tulips Deep in her magic dreamer's trance Pretending that there is a prince who'll save her from a Dragon's wrath He'll sweep her up and steal a kiss together they will ride in bliss Trees sway and swoon along the bank Reminding her of restless winds and that love is fleeting as a breeze Trees lose their leaves, and dreams will fade She listens, for the sound of hoofs O'er twig and stone, her eyes are keen Yet, not a prince, nor stead is seen Where tangled grass and willows lean As if a lily, but not the child who seeks her private solitude She comes to dream a little while then climbs across the wooden stile to leave the dream among the fronds at the quiet Willow Pond _____________________________________________ 6/4/18 Dragons, Dragonflies, And Huffle-Winks Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 6/26/2018 11:15:00 PM
Back again with another comment on this one. This is a beautiful poem, a gorgeous poem, really. It's got a recurring theme, a recurring leitmotif, imagery, rhythm flow, message --- in short, everything anyone could want in a poem. Checking the contest, I see that it didn't place. Go figure. In my book, that doesn't detract one iota from the value, the worth, the eloquence and elegance of this remarkable write. Bravo! ~ gw
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/27/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for this beautiful compliment !!!
Date: 6/25/2018 5:18:00 PM
Dreamy poem, Carrie. Soupmail.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/27/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you again, Agnes,.......and also for catching my typo ! It helps to have another eye!! :)
Date: 6/21/2018 4:01:00 PM
My youngest daughter just met her Prince who has told her she is his gift. Your lovely poem infers that dreams can still come true as they have for my Michelle. Fantasy can become reality and I adore this poem Carrie. Nature inspires our dreams. Beautiful! xxoo
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Date: 6/17/2018 10:29:00 PM
Delicate, delicious delicacy -- so well-conceived and executed, Carrie. A winner in my book! :) gw
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:06:00 AM
A lovely poetic fantasy, Carrie Reads like a winner!
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Date: 6/5/2018 6:02:00 PM
a beautiful entry for her contest, Carrie! Nicely rhymed.
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