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?I wanted to discover the world through your body, to be in adventure, to know the truth, about rain, wind, rainbow, and morning breeze, but I never touched you, hugged you, smell your neck, and breath through your breath, but today, when it was raining outside, I figured that rain is not your sadness, wind is not your madness, rainbow is not your smile, and breeze is not breathing through your breath, rain is tears of joy that falls from sky when you wink, wind is when world want to smell like you it come and touch you, rainbow is sort thanking after your wink to the sky it bow his hade, and breeze I can?t figure it until I see you and smell your neck?..?

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Date: 1/3/2016 7:52:00 PM
Excellent
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Date: 10/27/2011 12:15:00 PM
I stopped back today to see if you had written anything new Alinsa. I hope you will continue to write and share more poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:10:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Alinsa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2011 10:12:00 AM
WOW, everthing but the knot in your stomach :) Very nice write ~ peace
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Date: 10/15/2011 3:58:00 AM
may be time to travel, eh? nice write, beauty nites and days always~N
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