To Comment Or Not

Tasty words! With ketchup served hot.. Shattered Romeos, lover’s paradise: NOT! The odd desperate housewife, wanting more! Tired with the ONE hubby real sore.. “Feeling blue” they summon the angels from the wind Trying hard to kindle the reader’s insatiable flint! Stupendous secrets succumbing into the great “Void” Fearlessly the writer rescues his version of The Helen of Troy! The War time heroes, With their grueling woes…and wives bestowed with imperial wait I turn the page with a numb conscience Still not in for comments! Its when I see the boy who runs from the world, A rich kid, a football hunk, always with a pretty doll; Searching for peace, Not some corrupt grease: Lying at the face of the human race: He finds divinity in nature, Happiness in the beggar’s couture All the fantasies he has, and the reality he fakes Makes my finger whisper, like silent snowflakes: I applaud the struggling lad, I can feel The need of the vision and the dream… ~~ Entry in Comments vs Views~~