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To Change the World

The old machine is breaking down... we need a new one, one that doesn't burp, grind and scream --- and kill; One that doesn't worship money... exploit --- with cold, long hands and call it: victory --- When money is more important than people: what do you think will happen? They will come for you... and take everything, your children will be like them and they will rape the earth, they will become killers for money We need to change, fast --- like the world grows more evil, but faster, much faster: but we need a model, called truth 'O but our hearts won't let us see the truth so easily, will it? --- perhaps it is not our hearts that speak loudest, but our egos? (it never was loudest) these 'hearts' of ours; our hearts should tell us to change our mind, so we can see the truth and then, and only then, Love One never knows love, til truth shines through; for love will fade for lack of it We did not see the truth, when they butchered Christ, or in his name torture, burn --- and subjugate with Crusade and create hell; it's hard to see heaven when staring in the fires of hades... So we built churches, so many they are all separate, bickering and fighting and warring, amongst One another --- they are all the same... (yet believe their church is God's) packed them all together in various work-places, and expect success? these hearts of ours (fodder for the devil) All our societies are founded on sacred books, but its not working --- one only need to pick up the morning paper... we have misunderstood, we have believed that God needs something, demands something --- indeed, punishes His own creations; we have given glory to divisions, in 'the pursuit of excellence' which creates few 'winners' and many 'losers' indeed, there are more divisions in society, than people And we call this 'progress'? To what end? Destruction? A better smart-phone --- is more important: than the fact that up to ten thousand children die a day of starvation? that up to forty wars happen a year? --- that our children and their children may live a life in world war? These hearts of ours... must change, as a great man once put it: (before kingdoms can change) **** I wrote and posted this piece because I have been given a lot and this is just one of the ways of returning the favor. It might be controversial to some --- but I can assure you what we're up against isn't a ping-pong match. Invariably we must answer whether we want to survive as a species. Will we?****

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/19/2017 8:02:00 PM
A passionate piece that is a wake up call as to the disastrous path we are on with our bloated excess of material wants while we walk as empty, starving shells craving spiritual nourishment and soulful connections. Wise insights, incredibly penned. Not an easy read yet a vital one. Excellent.
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Date: 6/10/2017 1:42:00 PM
Your message sings of truth and thus the world(WITH ITS DELIGHTFUL DARKNESS AND DECAY) will decry it. Yet only faith and divine love can save this earth and us. Such brilliant verses leading to the light of love and truth!!! A super 10 and a fav my fiend.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 6/12/2017 9:36:00 AM
Many thanks Robert, I did not know how people would react to this warning piece, I expected perhaps one comment; but you, Richard, Peter and nette are so far beams of light exceeding my expectations. I'm well pleased you like this necessary poem. God bless:-)
Date: 6/9/2017 8:47:00 AM
I fear it is doubtful we will survive. This is a sobering cautionary tale.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 6/12/2017 10:03:00 AM
Very well put Richard, for everything right now is most certainly leading to our extinction, change is necessary, we're stuck like silly-pigs in the mud right now --- what? Trump will lead us to salvation? People are hungry for new, fresh ideas and Trump, for instance, is not the answer. But I have faith in our God given capacity to achieve incredible things which will reverse this bog we're in
Date: 6/4/2017 3:13:00 PM
wow, keith, a strong reflection of a piece straight from the hart and gut...huggs
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 6/6/2017 10:57:00 AM
Thanks nette, it needed to be said. People all over the world are raising the same questions I am, we just don't hear about it much because the media works for the Man. People naturally say 'ok' but what can we do about it? We can start solution groups for various problems, new fresh ways at logical approaches by thinking collectively, rather than individuals. Put serious questions to our theological beliefs without fear or as a consequence admit a certain belief is flawed and doesn't work anymore.

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