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To Celebrate My Life

Can you, O Lord, Dim the sun a bit, And brighten the moon some? Can you mix wine in the seas a bit, And add in the winds fragrance some? Can you splash colors over the clouds a bit, And add music to the rains some? Can you sling a swing over the rainbow a bit, And toss confetti with the snow some? I can then revel in my life a bit, And greet death with smiles some!

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Date: 5/23/2017 1:03:00 PM
Lovely thoughts Abdul, congratulations...
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Date: 5/23/2017 1:08:00 AM
I enjoyed the feeling of your poem brought about by words that your colorful imagery brought to life Abdul. Congratulations on your first placement! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/22/2017 2:37:00 PM
Nicely written Abdul! A well deserved "first place".
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