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To Bide Her Time

Love came again to bide her time To sit upon the swing and gaze To run a hand through my hair Many little bells caress my spine She wore a dress to match her eyes As kingdoms fall and states divide So does my breath against my hand Tremble here with heavy quaking sighs I know I give myself too fast to her But oceans pull and do not compromise The choice will rest with me no longer A life without this I shall not endure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2013 10:43:00 PM
Its a beautiful thing when one is so certain of the feeling 'A life witout this I shall not endure' Really nice poem - love the flow and the sweetness of that moment taking me on a little journey. Shaz
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Date: 3/3/2013 2:54:00 AM
Jeremy this is awesome!! I'm speechless. A wonderful poem my friend. Well done. I am so enjoying reading your work in the either-time of day. I'll be back for more and belated congrats on your wins!!! Big huggsss deb
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Date: 3/1/2013 7:56:00 AM
i love your romantic rhyme..yep i do
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/3/2013 2:17:00 AM
Charmaine, thank you. You're very sweet!
Date: 2/27/2013 5:08:00 PM
now this is a different one. You rhymed lines one with four. I really enjoyed that. It's sure a sweet poem.
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Date: 3/3/2013 2:17:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. And yeah, sometimes I bust a rhyme, when I feel like it. Hah.
Date: 2/27/2013 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful Jeremy ...stay happy
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/3/2013 2:16:00 AM
Thanks, Donna. Hope you're happy, too
Date: 2/27/2013 1:47:00 PM
- Love is great Jeremy, hope happiness is come to stay forever. - Beautiful poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 1:55:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you. I hope you are doing well!!

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