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To Be Or Not To Be

A lowly blossom, striving to sustain her beauty in the early morning mist, the crocus, craving moisture to maintain her stoic fight 'gainst winter's iron fist. A lowly mollusc slithers 'neath his shell, he slowly weaves, and leaves a silver trail, antennae primed, and ready for the death knell, when sparrows poke and peck his coat of mail. Creatures and plants in the midst of the fray, searching for sustenance, dying of thirst, staving off hunger, say, is there a way for them to be blessed, not feeble and cursed? predator, prey, both the weakest and strongest, who will prevail in the fight to live longest?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/7/2016 11:15:00 AM
I can never resist a good sonnet. Great job. Best wishes, Nigel
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/7/2016 12:26:00 PM
Thanks again my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/5/2016 6:33:00 PM
Definitely a magnificent sonnet , you nailed it in this one my dear , these are strong and beautiful words, great job and hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/5/2016 6:35:00 PM
Thanks for your beautiful words! Best wishes to you, Keith
Date: 1/5/2016 4:21:00 PM
i know that i've used this adjective more than a few times for your poems, keith, but i have to use it again - brilliant! i have to thank you for providing your readers with such gorgeous imagery...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 6:19:00 PM
Thanks Nicola! You are too kind... Keith
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Date: 1/5/2016 6:15:00 PM
Bless you for saying so! and thank you for such a delightful review! Keith
Date: 1/5/2016 11:18:00 AM
Well that is indeed the question. A very profound, existential, and observational piece, Keith. Lovely imagery in this.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 12:44:00 PM
Thanks Michael... your kind remarks are much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/5/2016 6:12:00 AM
beautifully painted keith this breathed in your pen to be or not to be only the strong survive excellent piece
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 6:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Liam... your kind words are most gratefully received. Best wishes, Keith

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