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CAN YOU FIND THE SPIDER'S WEB ON SHAKESPEARE?

 

 

shakespeare the playwright asked "to be or not to be?" i say "some question?" ---------- --------------- or not!
09/21/2014

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Date: 9/23/2014 12:00:00 AM
hahaha. I don't know what it is either!!! You picked a good form for it!!! I had this T Shirt once. It said something like: To be or to do da pa do do da. (something like that. It was a take on Frank Sinatra or something. Wish I could remember what it said!!!) I'm glad you liked Rush. I worked a while on that. But three times longer just to think of a topic!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/23/2014 1:42:00 AM
Or your T- Shirt said: To be or not to be—William Shakespeare To be is to do—Jean Paul Sartre To do is to be—Bertrand Russell Scoo be doo be doo—Frank Sinatra
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/23/2014 1:01:00 AM
Your T-Shirt said: “To be is to do”—Socrates. “To do is to be”—Jean-Paul Sartre. “Do be do be do”—Frank Sinatra.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/23/2014 12:47:00 AM
Andrea, no exaggeration it is the best modern Haiku I have ever read. I predict it will win first place although you never know but I can't under any scenario not making the top three. It inspired me to completely rewrite my entry. It isn't even close to yours but a lot better than what I had. I used a twist that my give it a little boost. I have a competitive nature but I also realize that I am a minnow in an ocean of whales. The contests produce some amazing poetry. It is in many ways the idea that carries the Soup.
Date: 9/22/2014 7:36:00 PM
It's apparent that the answer is to be not.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/23/2014 7:09:00 PM
Ah.... what was the question.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2014 7:47:00 PM
There you go. Brilliant Brenda, but you already knew that.
Date: 9/22/2014 7:30:00 PM
So what's the answer.... LOL... For both, questions? Where indeed is the SPIDER!!! And what is the answer to Shakespeare's question... To be or not!!!T!!!A!!!G!!!!!!!Y!!!O!!!U!!!A!!!R!!!!!E!!!!!!!!!I!!!!!!T!!!! LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2014 7:46:00 PM
No fair! That was a sneak Tag witch is against the rules. Oh wait a minute there are no rules darn.
Date: 9/22/2014 9:34:00 AM
and the humor flows, Maurice
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Date: 9/21/2014 8:57:00 PM
The teensy weensy spider is bemused in the web of the bards locks. It also looks as if a few pigeons have left their mark. Or has he just turned into a writers block?
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Date: 9/21/2014 8:52:00 PM
"To pee or not to pee", the answer will wet more than your appetite.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/22/2014 7:35:00 PM
Bahaahaha
Date: 9/21/2014 8:45:00 PM
It was Some Question Maurice...This I'm a little more familiar with as much as I don't understand this version of Poetry.I absolutely love The Shakespearean Concept of The Angels when I found it in A Book I read about Angels...Yup Old Shakespeare was In it..The thought is absolutely Fabulous because it truly was a loaded Question..By the way I rate with 7's every time due to effort and achievement...No worries.Beside it is very Healthy to Always ask the question Friend.thank You I enjoyed this.
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Date: 9/21/2014 6:19:00 PM
If this the stupid version...do you have the answer key...I forgot to study.
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Date: 9/21/2014 6:18:00 PM
I like this .
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Date: 9/21/2014 6:10:00 PM
To be or not to be?What 's in a name ? : ) Exquisite haiku !!
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Date: 9/21/2014 6:07:00 PM
'tubby or not tubby'.... fat is the question - that would be my stupid version LOL Hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/21/2014 6:23:00 PM
It is like the "where's Waldo" book I am releasing. I don't actually put Waldo in the illustrations. It will drive people crazy and keep the real stupid ones amused for years.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/21/2014 6:20:00 PM
True.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2014 6:20:00 PM
LOL maybe tomorrow Maurice I'm off to bed now:-) Hugs and sweet dreams Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2014 6:15:00 PM
////00\\\\ I cant see the spider only the web:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/21/2014 6:15:00 PM
I like yours write it as an Haiku and post it.

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