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To Be Or Not To Be

FOOLHARDY free to follow- or deny then to wonder why JEOPARDY free to follow- much to late then,to wonder why ECSTASY free to follow- in rapture then,with wonder cry Inspired by John 8:33-36

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Date: 8/17/2009 9:05:00 PM
Awesome message, in amazing form, Brian, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/17/2009 5:14:00 PM
oh yes, I agree w/others! going into my favs!
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Date: 8/17/2009 5:12:00 PM
I adore the method in which you seem to chant the human life lived...that results in the discovery of wonder & rapture! SO WELL DONE! Brian! and thanks, am humbled by your recognition of my poetry, james
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Date: 8/17/2009 10:38:00 AM
Dear Brian, thank you for my place in your contest. Thank you also for all your support. God Bless. Vernette
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Date: 8/17/2009 10:35:00 AM
This one makes one pause and reflect. A poem to inspire, and strengthen one's faith. Wonderful form and inspiring words. ~ Love, Carrie Ps... Thank you once more Brian for supporting our poetry, and inspiring my writing with your contests.. I appreciate placing in your contest...and I when I'm stuck for a new idea...these contests give me direction! I applaud all of you who sponsor the contests!! Thanks so much!
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Date: 8/17/2009 7:27:00 AM
Brian wonderful poem that will go into my favs - loved this form you used - Very well done Brian - God Bless - YF4L, MJ
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:08:00 AM
wonderful scripture and a good piece of writing..thanks for all the comments...
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:02:00 AM
Now , that was the question !! . PH was foolhardy , Tiger was then in jeopardy , but Yang was now in ecstasy . Inspired by Brian 8:17-09 .....
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Date: 8/17/2009 2:47:00 AM
Thought-provoking as well as intelligent write...Thank you for sharing
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Date: 8/17/2009 12:56:00 AM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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