To Be One

Speak in my dark night Color your quiet words without sight Touch my wide open eyes without tears, my mouth without tongue, No words, no sorrow, no cries leave your lips, no sound bounces around One time I walked, my words had volume, they were proud to share me The hollow sound will echo in my head, be savoured on my lips I came you went, nobody and everybody passed through me If you say I am, I will be again speak my name and I exist in you *** July 23, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Derek Noble Ayi

Date: 8/7/2017 10:23:00 AM

So deep and touching . It's good to come out strong and never allow your situation overtake the beautiful part of you. Our words must always have volume so that we can touch lots of lives positively. God bless you for this piece.

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/31/2017 7:47:00 AM

Hello Darren, This is a superb verse for sure!! I found that I seemed to be in a state of very deep thought and reflection as I read and re-read your verse here several times. Enjoyed this one very much!! Cheers, Gary

Lewis Y. K

Date: 7/25/2017 2:06:00 PM

Hello Darren, This is Kimberly my poem is She. I like to thank you so much for the warm welcome. I really enjoy your work, but this one is my new favorite.

Niall Fulham

Date: 7/25/2017 12:00:00 PM

Hi Darren , very well penned , had to read a few times thanks for sharing :)))))

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/25/2017 11:28:00 AM

A truly intense poem, Darren. Emotionally evocative, such strength expressed thru the weakness of loss. Astounding poetry of much worth. Should be read by all in PSoup. An instant fave. Love and joy always.

Silent One

Date: 7/25/2017 9:42:00 AM

Rumi said "silence gives answers." Sometimes we need to lose ourselves, to find ourselves.. That can be a big challenge, full of obstacles, physical, mental and psychological.. along the way we lose so much, sometimes we lose ourselves, but eventually we find who we really are. If others forget, then that is their loss.. Deep write my friend..

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/25/2017 9:32:00 AM

A sad write, Darren, you can come out of the dark :) you will soon:)

Dean Wood

Date: 7/25/2017 8:53:00 AM

Darren, this poem touched me deeply. You have communicated so well the lost, the lonely, the longing. So well done my friend! - Dean

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/25/2017 7:11:00 AM

The cries of the dark...i feel the pain. Nicely done, Darren!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/25/2017 4:42:00 AM

Your brilliant words speak to us as always dear Darren. We are here , and we hear you loud and clear. I for one will speak your name, did you hear ? ...Maria

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2017 12:45:00 AM

Awesome Darren! The very reason we are all equal. I really love the depth of power in this amazing piece! : )

Darren White
Date: 7/25/2017 1:00:00 AM

Thank you Connie, and yes, we are :)

White Wolf

Date: 7/24/2017 10:47:00 PM

Crane bag ~~~/|\~~~

Darren White
Date: 7/25/2017 12:59:00 AM

That bag must be overflowing by now ;p

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2017 7:39:00 PM

Darren, you are and you do exist.... had to read a few times... to feel your soul... Lots of hugs

Darren White
Date: 7/25/2017 12:58:00 AM

Thanks Eve, hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2017 2:03:00 PM

- Lovely pondering, Darren - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 2:08:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane

Date: 7/24/2017 1:31:00 PM

He exists in everyone, but some are blind to see. Your eyes are wide open and so is your heart to being made whole again. You can hear Him speaking, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 1:35:00 PM

Thank you Lin, very much so.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/24/2017 1:25:00 PM

Magnificent...I was seducing me, me ran away.... What happened to I, when me no longer stay.... pashang

Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/31/2017 7:46:00 PM

The thing I wrote is from a piece called without me, at 10/30/2015. It is kind of like yours "to be one" mine is in the form of masnavi. Not too many people write in this from.

Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 1:29:00 PM

Thank you pashang, I am happy with that wonderful compliment.