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To Be Much Younger Than I Am

If I could be much younger than I am, with my time in life as yet too brief to give me evidence and cause to change my views. If views I held. I would know such simple ways to right the world and all the people and injustice in it. I’d have such certainty of right and wrong, old failures disregarded, that all my eyes would see of times to come would be my hopes, and of my past, successes. I could show my strength of will with lines drawn deep in evening sands and cancelled by each morning’s tide. And the loss of every latest, greatest love would be forgot whenever dark eyed interest was sidelong glanced my way. If I could be much younger than I am.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/10/2013 5:06:00 PM
I cannot believe it. I FOUND ONE I NEVER SAW YET. If I were young again, I would want to go back with memories intact, so I would not make the same mistakes. But maybe that is all wishful thinking. Your writing is always sophisticated and it holds my interest!
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Date: 6/4/2013 6:36:00 AM
- When we were young, we wished we were older .... when we are "older" we want to be younger .... it will be the way it is. - Well written, Red !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2013 3:33:00 AM
Awwww, sweet. May you soon encounter the wished for dark-eyed glance. Lovely stuff, Red. I like :)
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Date: 3/7/2013 9:18:00 AM
ha, join the club,,, if I could be much younger with this knowledge... life would be interesting... love your different take..LINDA
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Date: 3/6/2013 3:28:00 PM
Hello Red, sending you some soup mail...LINDA
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Date: 3/6/2013 4:30:00 AM
You are an incredibly, sweet, intelligent and knowing poet. Your work is so important to me. I'm your biggest fan xxxx
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