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To Be Loved By You Again

If I had but one chance more To talk to you and hold you I would fill you with those things I held back out of fear I think This time I would not be afraid I would let you speak to my soul Allow you deep in my heart too And when I needed to weep I'd accept your strong shoulder When my spirit became hungry I would let you feed me with Words of wisdom and comfort You'd surely be invited into the Inner sanctum of my reality There to find more love than Either of us has ever known If I had but one more chance....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/16/2010 5:11:00 AM
sad but a wonderful peace here thank you again duncan
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Date: 10/10/2010 5:43:00 PM
Very sad.But beautifully written with love and passion.Sometmies in life we wish we had the chance to atone our mistakes.It is in our nature.I really enjoyed this poem.You are one of my favorite poets on the soup.Love,jamecia
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Date: 10/10/2010 12:00:00 PM
very nice write well done and spoken hope you are having a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:02:00 AM
Very passionate write on love and its yearnings, Deb
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:46:00 AM
Many of us would like to go back and do some things differently, you are not alone in that, you have expressed that wish extremely well in your poem and thanks for the comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:43:00 AM
Deb, many live with regrets and thoughts about "what if" we had done something differently. I think a lot of readers will identify with the sadness you convey so well in this poem. Beautifully penned! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:26:00 AM
Loved this really good write sarah x
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:20:00 AM
Great free verse my dear poet friend, so enjoyed....love Michael
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:01:00 AM
Excllent write, hind site is always twenty , twenty. Enjoyed the read.
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