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To and Fro

inspiration makes its own pace decides the form rhythm pause rhyme design bubbles from its spring seemingly inexhaustible 'til suddenly it dries I stop.. put down my pen.. await the rain again

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/6/2012 8:36:00 AM

Lovely poem, Brian. It goes back and forth, just as the title, but there is another depthto the words.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2012 6:20:00 AM

Writing to the rhythm of the falling rain..Great one..Enjoyed...Sara

Nathan D.

Date: 7/2/2012 8:59:00 AM

awesome. duke strand or should i say sir strand

Brian Strand
Date: 7/2/2012 9:17:00 AM

Thanks Nathan ,you are a true 'Barnabas'.Please see my comment my blog today re your other points!.Have a good day.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/30/2012 7:46:00 PM

Brian....sometimes I feel such helplessness as a poet to impact anything....with my poetic drival....then I awake and try again....nice art! Jimbo