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To a Voice In My Head

I don't know who you really are, but I love the things you mutter! Like, "Eat more chocolate! Fat is in! That biscuit needs more butter!" You said the limit is "Suggested speed. Just hit the pedal harder." You tell me to just let one rip then accuse another farter! I almost passed on expensive shoes that looked and fit just great, Because my account was overdrawn! Thank God you set me straight! And as I sit here penning this, I love you more than ever. You were right, I feel so good, having killed my boyfriend Trevor!

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Date: 12/10/2018 12:06:00 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Cindi :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2018 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Cindi, I can't get rid of the annoying voice.
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Date: 12/8/2018 10:53:00 AM
Nice take on the contest Cindi.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/12/2016 7:52:00 AM
Oh!! But this has a real chilling end...a surprise at the end....poor Trevor! :D Congrats Sunita
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 9/12/2016 10:01:00 AM
I find the harshest criticism in the world is "predictable." Thank you!
Date: 9/11/2016 9:16:00 PM
Great dark write! Constantly pushing the boundaries, now falling over them!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 9/11/2016 9:37:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/11/2016 6:43:00 PM
That last line...so unexpected for sure...and chilling! Congrats on your podium win, Cindi. Sandra
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 9/11/2016 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 9/11/2016 5:50:00 PM
Cindi, very cute poem lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 9/11/2016 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Laura Loo. Big fan of your work!
Date: 7/28/2016 8:31:00 PM
Cindi, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT**
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 7/28/2016 8:35:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT!!
Date: 7/27/2016 9:55:00 PM
I was moved by your poem, Cindi, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever (sk)~LINDA~
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Date: 7/14/2016 4:59:00 AM
Cindi I adore the voice in your head that leads to a shocker of an ending. A 7 for sure! peace and love, jill
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 7/14/2016 5:02:00 AM
Thanks, Jill! <3
Date: 7/13/2016 10:46:00 PM
love the rhyme of this... funny on the outside, but sad within... nice poem...
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 7/13/2016 10:49:00 PM
Thank you. That's life, right? Funny on the outside, sad within.

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