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To a Place

~ Her love took me to a place, the likes of which I have never seen I was lost in the wonder that greeted me along a pathway of stained glass tiger lilies and hummingbirds singing in harmony Where the beauty of the sunrise was painted in watercolor brushstrokes upon cerulean skies drifting beyond a lazy horizon beckoning my eyes in frilly fonts and promised smiles I found castles carved of sweet dark chocolate sitting atop lavender laced hillsides overlooking evergreen forests of butterflies and ladybugs frolicking amidst feathery branches When there before me floated a heart shaped dream, crimson red in satin wishes where we both would live beside a flowing stream reflecting every affection and desire we held Yes, her love took me to this place, lifting me from a darkness where moons hid and stars cried beyond ashen clouds, where happiness was a way of life and forever a welcomed ending ~

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Date: 2/6/2020 2:46:00 PM
This is another stunner Chris, always enjoy your interesting word combinations, dark chocolate castles...I mean...only from your mind could words come to life on the page.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 3:19:00 PM
You are far too kind my friend. Thank you for everything John.
Date: 2/5/2020 12:03:00 PM
I had to fav this one, it's amazing and I must visit those chocolate castles!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 12:17:00 PM
They are delicious, that's for sure. : ) Thank you so much M.L.
Date: 2/4/2020 8:35:00 PM
Just glorious, Chris. You continue to outdo yourself, holding the standard high, which this reader dearly appreciates. Thank you for the treat and privilege of reading the results of your craftmanship. In friendship, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thank you my friend for always being so kind to me
Date: 2/4/2020 7:33:00 PM
Your imagery n this beautiful piece is divine Chris! I loved this uplifting poem. xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie. I always look forward to your encouraging and beautiful comments
Date: 2/4/2020 5:07:00 PM
There is a place that I know. Think that was West Side Story.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 5:30:00 PM
Perhaps it is. Thanks so much.
Date: 2/4/2020 2:13:00 PM
- Sounds like a heavenly place, Chris - Beautifully written ... stay there forever ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your wonderful visits always Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/3/2020 9:30:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve. I am thrilled you liked it.
Date: 2/3/2020 7:37:00 PM
Oh, wow. You have written another favorite for me! I love stained glass windows and all the things you poetically mention in this beautiful poem. It has taken me away to a place I will return later. Thank you! Well written Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I know I can always count on you to bring some sunshine to my day. Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/3/2020 7:03:00 PM
Wow.... This is stellar Chris, you really outdid yourself with this write. So many beautiful images stained glass tiger lilies watercolor brushstroke. Just wow and a big sigh.....hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Sandy for your beautiful comment. I appreciate you always.
Date: 2/3/2020 5:28:00 PM
Simply exquisite! :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Jan. I am glad you liked this

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