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To 143 This Valentines

1 4 3 on Valentines... From Me I was used to having you around Even though it meant my head would pound Even though my heart would ache I was used to waking up and seeing your face But everything happens for a reason That’s what they say You and I had our time Joyful and sad days, our love was bitter and sweet like lemon lime I don’t mind letting her have you this valentine’s coz I had mine Mine was twelvemonths times fourteen I was with you since I was a teen Now a grown woman, and I am pleased, to have journeyed this road with you With a smile on my face and a little pain in my heart I wish you a Happy Valentine’s Day...1= I 4= Love 3= You

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2015 11:59:00 AM

Dimakatso, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Dimakatso Mnguni
Date: 5/24/2015 6:02:00 AM

Hi Linda Thanks for a nice warm welcome. Thanks for the feedback! I'm lucky to have all of you! :-) looking forward to seeing your work -my poet friends!

Darlene Gifford

Date: 5/22/2015 8:06:00 AM

Welcome here, Dimaka, I enjoyed reading your poem and hope you will want to read one of mine. If you have any questions, all of us here are ready to help.

Darlene Gifford
Date: 5/24/2015 6:51:00 AM

I Wanted to read another poem of yours, but see that so far you have only posted one.

Dimakatso Mnguni
Date: 5/24/2015 6:04:00 AM

Darlene Thank you for rwsding and enjoying my poem. I will definitely direct questions to all of you for help!-thanks - looking forward to seeing your work too! :-)

Dimakatso Mnguni

Date: 5/21/2015 9:48:00 PM

Hi SKAT. :-) Thank you for the sweet welcome! I am looking forward to the love and beautiful work of the likes of you! :-) Once again, thanks for the welcome-much appreciated.

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2015 5:31:00 PM

Dimakatso, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT