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TLC MTB Us meant to be is what that means This chant made us strong giving us a powerful bond We float up and reach the highest peak then come back down to prove we can't be beat People thought we dissed what was underneath our feet but before we were the footstools you stood on when you were weak Don't try to change it now you were lost now your found in between a lie you didn't have to tell now you have your soul to sell to a stranger only reeling in more danger with the rod of blackmail waiting to grab you by your tail then munch on your dreams like their nothing we chased the waterfall cause we knew it was coming

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Date: 6/9/2014 9:37:00 AM
JADE, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-
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Date: 6/8/2014 12:46:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jade :) - I choose your first winning poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2014 12:55:00 AM
Interesting write, congrats on the win, jade
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Date: 6/3/2014 3:10:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Jade. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/3/2014 3:00:00 PM
Jade,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/2/2014 9:27:00 PM
Excellent write - well done!
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Date: 6/2/2014 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 6/1/2014 6:47:00 PM
Jade, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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