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Each day was spent in anxiousness, and lives were framed by window squares, now sealed, surrounded, sized and shut, against the brittle tides... Our hearts have longed for those we love, and weep for those we've never met While living close to sorrow's edge I'd feared the world was gone, had burrowed down, … might lose a springtime filled with hope, forgotten how to skip a rope,… A titmouse flew outside the glass then perched upon the window sill It sat upon the window's edge and seemed to look me eye to eye, and by and by the moment filled with something new, I'd thought I'd lost I sipped the coffee from my cup… While looking up …my breath was caught, and snatched away like troubles, tossed New lens were honed for downcast eyes, I watched in awe, and joy was found for just this moment. And all around a cloud had lifted from the ground The dew was wrung from glacial fronds The ice was rendered from the pond I watched the titmouse fly away and glassy-eyed,...my hope rebound. My eyes are focused on the spring, that now, I know, will come again Alas, my reasoning is new The season and my dreams are too Whatever comes, we'll make it through Whatever comes we will find some good I'm grateful that the titmouse understood ___________________________________________________________ Written originally in 2018 Revised April 2, 2020 during the Pandemic

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Date: 4/30/2018 10:34:00 PM
A most delightful read, Carrie. Lovely poem.
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Date: 4/30/2018 9:10:00 AM
Lovely, Carrie-- congrats!
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Date: 4/29/2018 6:38:00 PM
Back with congrats! I knew this piece would do well :) and I'm not just birder biased ;) xomo!
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Date: 4/29/2018 6:02:00 PM
A thoughtful poem pondering the wonder of nature. Very nicely written Carrie.
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this unique and well-writtenpoem of spring. I enjoyed this a lot.
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Date: 4/29/2018 2:05:00 PM
Carrie, there's always so much comfort in reading your poems---no exception here---always a soft thought and a smile and wishes for everyday to be just like each that you describe.
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Date: 4/28/2018 5:02:00 PM
Absolutely stunning, dear Carrie. Top of my list. You have such a way with free verse akin to Robert Frost. Sure to be at the top of the winners circle. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 4/27/2018 7:18:00 AM
Hi Carrie: My awning had a lillie perch where every season a house finch would build its nest, mate and have chicks and when the chick grew, they all flew away. I would look forward to that time in Spring. I LOVE THIS POEM.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/27/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! Not sure if this is close to what Craig is looking for, but it was the first thought that came into my head! I appreciate your kind words...and love of birds !! :)
Date: 4/27/2018 5:48:00 AM
Wonderful penning Carrie! Preoccupied with feathered beings myself I can wholly relate to this piece. I think this is just what the sponsor is looking for, I expect to see this in top spot :) good luck to you! xomo
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/27/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen! You have been so kind and generous with your comments! Happy Spring!

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