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Title Wave

He kept "hanging around" Hoping for a glimpse down her top Since he can remember he's been "obsessed with flat" Perhaps one day it would be "engraved upon his stone" No beer or big boobs for this poor stiff! He was afraid his excitement might show "Ripping" through his zipper Revealing his "optomistic white" underwear Yet part of him imagined it "Escaping Gravity", Would she look at it and ask "Penny for your thoughts?" Would there be a "Before and beyond the bed"? For now he would be happy with just one glimpse His friends all thought him a bit weird In the end he'd rather be under her Than "Under the weight of words"! For fun I took the titles of my last 9 poems and tried to tell a story.

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/18/2021 7:05:00 PM

Interesting, Richard. You must have had your latest contest in mind.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2021 2:31:00 PM

I forgot I wrote this one. Thanks for the visit Milton.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/26/2016 6:15:00 PM

haha clever, a fun prompt that would be to write around poem titles. sending u some hugs sweetie x

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/4/2015 8:21:00 AM

Is there anything you can't accomplish with your pen? Any place your originality and creativity won't take you? I don't think so.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2015 9:37:00 AM

You are kind Monterey, thanks for the love!

Brian Baumgarn

Date: 4/1/2015 2:16:00 AM

Ahh, my teenage years. Nervousness and premature ejaculation. I really liked growing up when I did as all the girls had to wear skirts or dresses to school, everyday. I loved the no beer or big boobs line. My ex is really well endowed. We joked that she would have to be buried at the "Garden of Mammaries". Thanks, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/1/2015 9:07:00 AM

Your comment has made me smile! Thanks for the visit.

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/31/2015 9:09:00 AM

Provocative...coming from your own titles and finely presented in an amusing manner...haha. Kim :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/31/2015 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Kim.;0)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2015 9:06:00 PM

Well, you did a good job. 7 :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/31/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thanks! ;0)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/30/2015 6:36:00 PM

Great concept...excellent execution!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2015 8:35:00 PM

Thanks Armand. ;0)

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/30/2015 1:09:00 PM

Left me laughing. What a creative exercise, and fairly difficult too since it requires integrating specific phrases rather than just words.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2015 8:37:00 PM

Thanks for the thoughtful post.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/30/2015 12:06:00 PM

We both didn't post today...Just passing by to say ....Hey. Hope things ease up for you soon. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2015 8:36:00 PM

I enjoyed the two I read this morning. Still busy at this end. Looking forward to Thursday.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/30/2015 10:54:00 AM

very creative and well woven with dashes of sheer fun, rich.. hugggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2015 8:37:00 PM

Thanks and Huggs Nette.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/30/2015 6:39:00 AM

Genius the way you used those titles! Very entertaining and left me asking for more titles - poem:-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2015 8:43:00 AM

Thanks Njeri.

James Horn

Date: 3/29/2015 9:17:00 PM

Not upside down. Like two TV tubes. From where he sat. Pulled down slow below. Why would someone sit and stare? Maybe me with the mumps. But a bra that is many-tiered. Write one more poem while under the gun. Now you figure out what applies to what. Jim Horn

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2015 8:45:00 AM

You might need to explain this comment to me, I must admit it has left me confused.

Mama Bear

Date: 3/29/2015 7:00:00 PM

would have liked to see what you would have done if you added Florida Nature Interesting play with words. Love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2015 8:46:00 AM

Perhaps squeezing some oranges, *lol*.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/29/2015 5:17:00 PM

Been there done that,,and oh you do it so well, powerful title, along with a powerful poem,,this is for the imagination, and boy did i have fun with it...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2015 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Harry, I appreciate the visit.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/29/2015 4:38:00 PM

Oh WOW! That's some write, Richard. I wonder what made you want to do that. Very creative. :) Obsessed with flat, eh? I thought it was the opposite with men! ;) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/29/2015 4:42:00 PM

In reality flat would not quite cut it, but I must admit I am attracted to small and perky. It is a good thing we all have different preferences. Hugs back to you Eileen.;0)