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A child cries alone in the darkness- a mother dances in the sunshine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/18/2010 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Christi. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2010 3:31:00 AM
Sad, but excellent writing, Christi! (As usual.) Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 5/8/2010 8:12:00 PM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/6/2010 12:21:00 AM
congratulations on your placing Christi. this tugs at the heartstrings...Margaret
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Date: 5/5/2010 3:18:00 PM
wow, this one is very interesting and sad. . . LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/5/2010 8:05:00 AM
What a contrast--so sad it is too often the truth. Powerful poem. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:40:00 AM
So much unsaid!! Well done, Christi! Congratulations on this amazing win!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/5/2010 5:58:00 AM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/5/2010 4:56:00 AM
Congrats Christi on your winning poem in Brian's contest.. sweet write so enjoy your win.. luv.. Linda-Marie.
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Date: 5/5/2010 4:47:00 AM
congrats to you Christi on this wonderful Monoku! brings the darkness to light. Excellent work. -Robert
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:50:00 PM
All the best in the contest. Nice images
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