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A thin rope between life and death A pop of a string can determine your fate

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:44:00 PM

this one was very insightful. If it was for a contest, a shame you didn't place!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/6/2010 8:31:00 AM

Hey Faleshia, Thnx for leaving comments on my writes...always appreciated....Jimmy

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/3/2010 1:01:00 PM

Words of wisdom, Faleshia...life is very fragile...how God must marvel and shake his head when we're puffed up! Thanks for the kind comments, always...Love, Audrey

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2010 8:20:00 PM

YES BETWEEN OUR DESTINY AND FATE, I WONDER WHO DECIDES WHEN OUR STRING IS CUT, LOVE IT FALESHIA, GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST,,IRMA

Danny Nunn

Date: 5/2/2010 5:31:00 PM

A very good write of how much time any of us have, good write...thanks on Sheep,,glad that you liked it..Danny

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/1/2010 7:42:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. Nice expressions

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2010 2:22:00 PM

Great write that reminds us that any day could be the day no matter what the age of the person...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Date: 5/1/2010 1:35:00 PM

Wow! So much depth for the reader to ponder about. Great analogy. Best wishes in the contest! Keep up the good writing. Karen