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Titanic

in nineteen twelve at twelve o clock people were out in crowds dressed in their favourite frock as titanic was sailing to sea half our city went including me as we all aboard we waved goodbye the captain then shouted lets untie the ropes were off the ship and we were moving as the waves were tossing around us one night when we was in the middle of the sea my friends and i went out for tea that night i got settled and comfy in my cabin shortly after i was awoken with a man shouting Madam we have hit an iceberg so get to the life boats and dress very warmly in nice big coats to my horro the ship was sinking on one side and as i turned i couldnt believe my eyes the life boats were tested with seventy men and only twelve people were leaving on them the iceberg huge towering over us i cried it was like hell to look at crashing into us with pride the sea was on the ship ice cold it came rushing past everyone trying to escape everyone running fast it caught up with me so i closed me eyes and held my breath getting ready for my cold, breathless death until a man grabbed me to saftey and hurled me onto a lifeboat with all the shock and fear i had a lump in my throat the lump of fear went to my stomach and rolled into a ball trying to explode but it came out of my eyes running like a tap but i had to be strong for the lost child on my lap we were far away from the ship at last all that watching and waiting fifteen minutes past it was nearly gone the ship of dreams turned into misery will be at the bottom of the sea but people said it was unsinkable how could this be all we could hear and see was people jumping off the ship into a freezing cold sea it was snapped in half like the bones in my foot i looked around every one distraught and cut this will be the last of the titanic and all those confused souls we seen panic sucking them under it was like the biggest roar of thunder now titanic is the floor of the sea dead as can be it lies there still and quiet you was hopes and dreams for everyone but now your at the bottom of the world you havent saw daylight for years and i always wander if the sea is made up of all your tears

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Date: 8/9/2016 6:21:00 PM
This was my first ever poem ages 10
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