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Titanic

A stranger on a distant shore Sailing, a tall tower along the trembles, of an open sea I look and see with vision and wonder, where my destiny partakes A traveler of a vessel, in the distance glory I jump, I leap, breathing in the salty air Wind flowing gently along my face Embraced with laughter, we gather to dance and sing The night chilled air brings a sense of melancholy An echantment of sorts disturbes the embarkment, of my sense of security A stillness falls into my heart,as it starts to beat faster An essence of sadness emanates withen my soul I look up at the nights sky seeing spirit take flight I look to others We breathe together We embrace each other as we cry We all fly to the heavens golden glory Under the darkened sea Taryn Thompson email tarynthompson1977@gmail.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/13/2012 9:28:00 PM
I knoow nothing of contests referred to in other comments, but I know what I like. ANd this is such a piece. Congratulations on being featured this week, and for such a delightful write.
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Date: 4/12/2012 6:35:00 AM
Taryn, congrats, this is great, you have a gift!Looking forward to seeing more!
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Date: 4/11/2012 10:36:00 AM
Taryn congrats on your win..David
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Date: 4/11/2012 8:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poems...Patrick
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Date: 4/11/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest Taryn. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Taryn xx
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