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Tired So Tired

I’m tired so tired Energy is now redundant I can’t move from my fortress bed I just can’t take a step out of this safe shelter My thoughts are slow and stuck behind my body I’m all curled up and unclean I have neglected myself again How can I rise above this lethargy? Motivate myself from this state of my mind and shell Devious tiredness I can’t escape you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/9/2012 10:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your great write. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/9/2012 9:04:00 PM
this is a VERY good description of lethargy, David. Congratulations for your win!!
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:27:00 AM
Awesome descriptive write David!! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;)
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Date: 1/9/2012 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win David. Descriptive of all of us at times. love, Joyce
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Date: 1/9/2012 8:44:00 AM
If this is a Bio, I hope that you find the courage and strength to move beyond this state. Life is too short. Good luck to you David.
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on you win in Brian's contest David. Love, Carol
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