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Tiny Treasure

While preparing for the yard sale…there it was… Just as tiny as I cautiously recalled It is your hospital bracelet… Amongst the many papers sprawled Momentarily, I remembered seeing your tiny toes…tiny nose… I pictured your precious little face… I recalled how much your angelic demeanor and innocent charm led my thoughts to race I often think about you still today I wonder what lied ahead What had become of your precious little self… Did you have children and wed? Forever doubting but knowing I had made the right decision Fully certain still today With selfless, caring precision I wonder if you ever thought of me… Wondered what I was like I wondered if you knew how much you meant to me… Or were you purely full of spite? Soon, I am leaving this world… And as for me, you will never know You will not know my true unselfishness… Since I have no more candles left to blow I will always treasure you…my love I will always value the very few moments we had I will always keep you close to my heart So there is no reason to be sad So please, my true prize, my little one … All doubts, please cast aside For my tiny little treasure …your bracelet… Will forever be at my side ******************************************************************* Note: Please note that I wrote this in first person just to add drama to the story. This is 100% fictional and not based on my life. I hope I did the subject justice. ****************************************************************** ****Written for Paula Swanson's Yard Sale Contest***** Won 1st Place!!!

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Date: 12/1/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations Natalie on your well deserved featured poem this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:34:00 PM
I was starting to worry at the last bit! Beautifully worded, loving poem. A delight to read :)
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:58:00 PM
revisiting this cute one, and I hope to see a lot of new poems from you! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 7/8/2011 8:29:00 PM
well, how cool. I see you still won the contest despite it being fictional. Way to go. A wonderful idea you came up with for the contest!
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Natalie in Paula's "Yard Sale" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:00:00 AM
Wow-Thank you Paula and everyone for your very kind comments. I am very surprised and humbled :) Happy 4th to all-Love, Natalie
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:11:00 AM
well-deserved top win, natalie... sweet cheers to you! :) huggs
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Date: 7/3/2011 5:33:00 AM
an absoloute worthy winner, congratulations. a beautiful write
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Date: 7/3/2011 5:30:00 AM
And did the subject justice you did, Natalie. Congrats to you on the big win
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:37:00 PM
vivid emotions, real understanding, a lovely poem...well done...Syd
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Date: 7/2/2011 8:48:00 PM
Absolutely fantastic piece, Natalie. Awesome. Proud to share 1st Place with you. Have a great Fourth. Best to you and yours. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a mravelous win in this exciting contest. Job well done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:24:00 PM
Congrats Natalie on your first place win with this touching entry luv.. happy 4th luv..
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Date: 6/10/2011 7:01:00 PM
A lovely verse Natalie, you put meaning and light into this poem.
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Date: 6/10/2011 4:24:00 PM
wow! this brought many memories, and i hold all 6 of my tiny treasure bracelest. I love this poem, and it has very special meaning. I did have to part with one, but the bracelet is there to remind me of 10 little toes & 10 little fingers.. what a dreamy thought of forever.. thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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Natalie The Rogue Rhymer
Date: 6/10/2011 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Y Destroyer, for the very nice comment-that made my day. I'm really new at this, so I appreciate the kind words.

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