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Tiny Thought

T I N Y T H O U G H T I wonder if over the cliff was it hard reviling the card it never was usually does look my way make it go away don't want to do hurt you reasons gone we don't belong I better run stick around for fun open mind color blind our time is now doing the crime should I or shouldn't I stick around you won't frown play my tricks love can't be fix perfect never maybe clever hear me out leave you in doubt my soul will not comply holding back the tears today passes 6 years handled what I got something that was not giving my best shot to a tiny thought (p.d.)

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Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/13/2015 1:43:00 PM

Linda, this is a clever write. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2014 1:34:00 AM

seeing this one again and thinking maybe you could narrow it to five stanzas and use it in that one quatrain contest. she did want short lines! PD, is it just me? I have noticed lately that I am writing many comments but getting only half the replies I used to get. It's so discouraging. i feel like I am working my ass off with comments and my poems just sit there as if not being read! I am getting plenty of congrats comments, but I am wishing more people would read my new poetry. It's insane!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2013 10:19:00 AM

awesome I'm featured ... LOL...this was only a witty write... ME

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/5/2013 3:05:00 AM

Great write Linda, really enjoyed this as its so cleverly done. have blessed day, Gordon

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/3/2013 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your feature!!!! A wonderful read Love, Juli-Michelle

Kechi Odibi

Date: 10/3/2013 11:54:00 AM

Beautiful one. So insightful

Ivy Vresk

Date: 10/2/2013 7:40:00 PM

congrats on your poem being featured,Very nice poem,thank you for sharing,Ivy

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/2/2013 6:48:00 PM

love the way you penned this one, made me ponder a few thoughts of my own... congrats on having this poem featured :)

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 10/2/2013 5:09:00 PM

Congrats on the feature, PD. Some tiny thoughts can be mind boggling.

Daver Austin

Date: 9/30/2013 9:16:00 AM

Tiny thoughts can be mind-giants, eh? Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/30/2013 9:02:00 AM

Congrats on this poem being featured this week, PD !!

Robin Davis

Date: 9/24/2013 7:48:00 AM

This is different and unique. Clever and creative. Nice job

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2012 2:26:00 PM

clever poem, and clever poet

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/6/2012 6:43:00 PM

tiny thoughts keep us alive PD. - tiny thought grow,grow big,into good or bad,into pleasure or pain,into life or death - J.A.B. %

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2012 8:43:00 PM

soupmail. PD.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2011 3:05:00 PM

Here is another one I have responded to, even way back here. But I wanted to tell you hello, it's so fun to see you here today. About that collaboration I just commented on. Your part was SO much better, but I didn't say that underneath that poem.Let me know if you can think of any poems of yours I have not seen. Gotta move fast and see other comments before the hubbie gets home from having the truck fixed. Yes, Soup was BAD these past few days. It was actually good. I could take a breather. ha!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/4/2010 6:57:00 AM

Lots said for a tiny thought, really enjoyed this, this afternoon.. tc Wilma

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/10/2010 8:15:00 AM

Your tiny thought is amazingly wonderful, making us realize how sometimes even a tiny thought can be so grave & pinching. Excellent write my friend. Thanks for valued comments on 'I am sad today'. I feel that you are going through sadness, when we want our feelings to be shared. If you need to share any of your feelings you can write to me either through soup mail or on my direct mail. Just be strong as you are in your Poetry & everything would be fine. Love and best wishes.. Ravindra...Poet D

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/4/2010 12:27:00 AM

You sure got me thinking again with your tiny thought--enjoyed reading your poetry yet again :) & haha yay soup's back online --nikko :)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/26/2010 10:08:00 AM

This is just what happens when one dwells on a tiny thought...great writing and good rhythm to their words. Just wonderful, as it gave me some "tiny thoughts" to think about. Regards, Dan C

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/25/2010 8:09:00 PM

lol."creating a picture"? i will just take that as another mystery P.D. is putting together yet to come. haha, it'd would be crazy if you posted an actual picture! yeah right.lol anyway.no i didn't see it there, sounds like a wait to read though!for a back to back slam party. can't wait for your new post of entertainment tomorrow then, woo hoo! slammin friend. -Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2010 10:07:00 AM

Back to this poem with no new one to see. (do a Pablo Neruda for us!) P.D. I researched him before doing that poem. I could not do it simply from seeing a picture. I think when I took spanish Lit eons ago, I probably read a bit of his work. He is acclaimed as South America's best, so I think he is a poet worthy to be studied by us! Thanks for reading my poem today. LUv, Andrea

Royal Trevino

Date: 5/17/2010 10:13:00 PM

ryhming is awesome, you sure now how to put a good write together, Royal

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 5/13/2010 8:08:00 AM

I really like: "perfect never... That is a standout segment. Concise and memorable. I like your approach in this format. Regards, and thanks, Gerard

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/11/2010 10:11:00 AM

i really like this