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Tinted Shores

```` ```` ` merry-go-round twigs wiggling down rows of grasses… summer petticoats charcoal sands boling Monet grass wears red-tanned shades… bubbled tints on shore (c) double haiku `````````` for Briand's Any Theme/Form from nette onclaud

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2012 9:43:00 AM

congrats Nette luv on brilliant first place win luv.. awesome as always..

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 1/17/2012 3:27:00 AM

congratulations!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/17/2012 2:46:00 AM

Congratulations nette.xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/16/2012 11:42:00 PM

Two very nice haiku poems. Congratulations on winning with these.

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/16/2012 9:15:00 PM

Congrats Nette

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/16/2012 5:05:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Nette, Congratulations on your win Elizabeth

Andrew Crisci

Date: 1/16/2012 4:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win, sweet Nette! Your imagery goes far beyond those poetic thoughts on Tinted Shores...immensely awesome and delightful. Thank you for your kind comments. God bless. Love and hugs, Andrew.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2012 4:24:00 PM

Fascinating imagery. sweetie. Congrats on that awesome high placement.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/16/2012 2:19:00 PM

Awesome images in this doublet haiku...charcoal sands boiling and bubbled tints on shore is truly a great poetic picture...how'd ya do that AGAIN. Thanks for the report card yesterday too..u are a strict lil professor....and inspiring..still sipping on champagne in Paris in my poetry mind..it's too soon to retreat to your bubbly shore..lol. Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/16/2012 11:46:00 AM

Love the double Haiku !!! Congrats my dear Nette!!!! Love Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Form/Theme" contest Nette. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 1/16/2012 10:41:00 AM

Nette congrats on your win, liked it..David

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/16/2012 10:20:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my friend, bl

Rushda R

Date: 3/2/2011 1:35:00 AM

the imagery is amazing. congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 8:27:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one, Nette. WAY TO GO. LUcky you, summer coming and we are still in winter!

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/28/2011 8:08:00 PM

colourful haikus, congrats on your win in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 2/28/2011 11:14:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here!Congrats nette on your 1st place win!---kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 10:00:00 AM

Hello Nette, This is just wonderful! Such imagination and so full of light and love Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2011 9:49:00 AM

It's great to see you at the top, Nette with this beauty. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in first place. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2011 8:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 7:01:00 AM

Congrats Nette my friend on your first place win in Carol's contest with this excellent expressive entry luv... your words capture the imagination .. kudos on your top spot for a top notch poem ...

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2011 6:56:00 AM

Jasmine weeds wear sun-tanned shades Wow.Many congratulations for this win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/28/2011 6:33:00 AM

Really loved the last one especially you have the emotional content part down most excellently! Congrad's Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Nette. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol