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Timothy

He’s there. I can feel him. Every thought is consumed in his presence. No one really understands, And they don’t see. He’s there, Really there. I know he’s watching me. Why? I didn’t even know him. Yet, he’s there. His presence is confusing me. He’s telling me something, But right now, It’s hard to see. I’m thinking about him all the time Why? I didn’t even know him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/12/2009 9:39:00 AM
Someone watching over you and you're aware but not knowing who. Good write.
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:18:00 PM
nice work Serenity! great write!..love Maryam*
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:44:00 AM
To me this speaks of someone who may have passed, but has something yet to share. The write is very good and thank you for the comments on my work. Michael
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:33:00 AM
I read this two times and with every read I am absorb in the piece. Wonderful write..thanks for the comment on my work.
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