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Timeout

what do we need? i believe in stress relief clothes off, underneath can't help but tangle feet re-arrange and dangle feet on shoulder thighs make a right angle. you want Go. speed? Faster. breath me sweat you Faster. give up control i can take controll unpredictible? Go. like that Go. grab sheets don't fall! my bedframe versus wall you agree and say Yes agree to nothing say Yes! stretching tensing on the floor exactly what we came here for.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2012 9:15:00 PM
I'm tickled! Enjoyed your work, pal! Just a tip to help you get by: You will need to go to any poem of the poet(who made a comment to yours) you wish to respond to for your response to be read. Enjoy! Keep inspiring, Patrick! ;)
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Date: 6/26/2012 5:20:00 PM
Thank You Glenn! Yeah I am still getting used to the site and whatnot but I'll figure it out eventually haha. Again thank you, Appreciate it!
Date: 6/23/2012 12:45:00 PM
Hmmm... where was the 'timeout'? Good poem... Terry
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Date: 6/23/2012 12:51:00 PM
By that I meant taking time out of your day to head to the bedroom, but thank you!! much appreciated!

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