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Time Will Heal a Broken Heart

Someone broke your heart, you say, And now you want to hide away. Hiding doesn't solve a thing, It only prolongs suffering. Admit your pain but don't despair. Surround yourself with friends who care. Time will mend your broken heart, And soon you'll be ready for a fresh start. The pain and sorrow will fade away, And you'll live to love another day. 3/25/12 Kim Merryman for Michael J Falotico's How to Fix a Broken Heart contest.

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Date: 3/30/2012 8:09:00 PM
I like this simple and practical approach you took. If I'd done this challenge I think I'd have done it about like this!!
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Date: 3/28/2012 11:09:00 AM
Great write and advice Kim!!! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/26/2012 10:02:00 AM
great words and lovely couplets, Kim, enjoyed, jag
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Date: 3/25/2012 11:10:00 PM
Kim,love your couplets.. good luck in the contest.. very deep.. lovely message at the end...always..pd
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Date: 3/25/2012 8:43:00 PM
Outstanding entry, Kim. Enjoyed. Great job. Nice going. Good luck. hugs, Ralphie
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Date: 3/25/2012 8:26:00 PM
Good advice and a awesome write! Best of luck in the contest.
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