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Time To Reflect

she sits relaxed and fast asleep oblivious to all around a gentle snore from very deep she sits relaxed and fast asleep exhausted trying not to weep the month when memories abound she sits relaxed and fast asleep oblivious to all around two long years has passed her by time to reflect at what had been still hard remembering and not cry two long years has passed her by still asks the question why oh why was he chosen to leave life's scene two long years has passed her by time to reflect at what had been

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 8/10/2014 3:08:00 PM

I reflect on six long years that passed by like a blur. I still can't imagine what you go through. I feel for you and wish there was some advice I could give you, but words fail. I think time is the only thing that will help. I hope you find some peace during this time.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/10/2014 3:54:00 PM

Mostly I am ok but then it comes back at you. Thanks for stopping by Wayland. .....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 8/10/2014 1:22:00 PM

so so so sad a write - love the triolet form used here it makes it even more dramatic with the repetition:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/10/2014 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Jan for stopping to comment .... Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 8/10/2014 10:40:00 AM

So sad Seren.....thanks for sharing your pain...hugs Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/10/2014 1:04:00 PM

Thanks Tim for stopping by...Seren

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/10/2014 8:43:00 AM

Sad, sometimes even time doesn't wipe away the pain. hugs, beautiful triolets Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/10/2014 1:06:00 PM

Hi Casarah thanks so much for stopping by, time heals so they say, but it's a long process I guess....Seren