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Time To Go To Church

Family I know has a boy about ten A true story of what happened to them Twas the Christmas season, shopping downtown A store full of people running around Decorations in the department store A nativity scene on the main floor The ten year old stopped and gave it a stare Then he said, “Mom and Dad, Look over there” “There’s a box with baby Santa in it?” People over heard him giggled a bit For just the right words to say, Dad did search Then said, “It’s time we start going to church”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/28/2011 1:37:00 PM
Great Write, and I hope the father told the child the true meaning of christmas...congrats on this unique peice.
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Date: 12/25/2011 5:15:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Very creative..Sara
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Date: 12/24/2011 11:02:00 PM
I hope the parents got that boy straightened out. This is a very interesting set of couplets that collectively tell a nice story. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/23/2011 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Charles. Merry Christmas to you! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/23/2011 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations Charles. Love, Carol Happy Holidays
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Date: 12/23/2011 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations x
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:58:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem, Charles. Congrats on your win. Kim
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Date: 12/22/2011 7:30:00 PM
EXCELLENT funny one.I loved it. Congrats in the contest. (wish I had thought of this unique idea)
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