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Time To Fall

A nip in the air, Time for foliage splendor, Winter in the wings!

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/12/2014 9:22:00 AM

Congrats on this unique twist on Autumn which is my fav time of the year...Winter will be taking flight sooner than we know!! Congrats, Abdul!

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/12/2014 10:29:00 AM

Yes, you are right. We jumped from spring to winter this time. Where did the summer go? Thanks for your comments.

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/10/2014 2:34:00 PM

Beautiful win. Congratulations.

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/11/2014 10:11:00 AM

Thanks Faye (Dunaway?). I am honored! Lol. Appreciate your comment.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/9/2014 3:35:00 PM

Congratulations, I love the stage you have set.

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:18:00 PM

Whenever there's a nip in the air, I get the chills! Even after 30 years in this country, I haven't gotten used to the old man winter. Thanks for your comments.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 9:45:00 AM

Beautiful First place winner! Great one!

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:16:00 PM

Thanks Casarah.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:29:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:15:00 PM

I knew I had something there when I wrote it. But, well, IT WAS an "Aha" moment for me.

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

Date: 8/8/2014 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations!

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:13:00 PM

Thanks a bunch.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2014 5:51:00 AM

congrats on a wonderful haiku Hugs Jan xxx

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:13:00 PM

Thanks Jan.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 5:02:00 AM

Awesome haiku Abdul ! congrats on first place win!

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:13:00 PM

Glad you liked it. Thanks.

Charles Reese

Date: 8/8/2014 1:00:00 AM

nice Haiku. Love the imagery.

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:12:00 PM

Appreciate your comments. Thanks

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 12:42:00 AM

I like the line "Winter in the wings", Abdul. Congrats on great win.

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:11:00 PM

It's my line: "Always in the wings!" Never able to fly! Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2014 11:40:00 PM

HEY, so good to see this one top of the list. BIG congrats, Abdul.

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:10:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/7/2014 11:25:00 PM

Nice Abdul... Congratulations on your 1st place win... Verlena

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/9/2014 6:09:00 PM

Thanks, Verlena.