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Time Stands Still

Time Stands Still As I tenderly walk in the welcoming field; I feel the warm caress Of the sweetness of springs wind blowing on my mauve dress When in this time, time seems to stand so lucidly still Sometimes I feel our long-distance love affair is standing as a drill. As we both do work in different trades of various work These times when I'm home and so all alone I thus smirk And then unto my eyes as I see a silhouette of a shadow dance We'll keep each others lingering fragrance in a sheer romance. Alas, in the future we'll be romancing in pleasure of a beauty of cause Off in the field, we'll be fully rendered in lieu of your delicate pause As we succumb to these sweet-scented fields to our desires We'll be captivated to experience whimsical delectable passionate fires. I'll be passionately waiting here home for you so we can share Our endearing time for I feel like time stands so still for you beyond compare. Written:1/10/14 Theresa Marie

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 6:29:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/10/2015 12:12:00 PM

Thank you very much Makama for you beautiful comment on my penned poem...

Constance La France

Date: 7/7/2015 2:30:00 PM

Theresa, lovely romantic write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, in morning's hush

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/7/2015 3:07:00 PM

Thank you very much BW for your beautiful comment on this penned sonnet of mine... hugs Theresa

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/7/2015 1:43:00 PM

Aha... now I see what I've been missing my dear Tess! Such a nice poem, sweet lady! Love, Jack xxx

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/7/2015 3:06:00 PM

Thank you very much Jack for your beautiful comment on this sonnet of mine.... Hugs and love... Tess xxx

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 7:09:00 AM

An evocative reflection on a loving relationship, delicate, two particles attracted but orbiting each other. Reminds me of summer evenings in unmown Barleyfields in my youth, in that warm amber light before sunset. Lovely piece, Theresa. Viv x

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/7/2015 3:04:00 PM

Thank you very much Viv for your beautiful and evocative comment on this penned poem of mine. It sure does bring back many happy reflections upon one's eyes. Theresa.. xx

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/1/2015 1:13:00 PM

Gripping, Intense, Lovingly Written.

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/1/2015 3:27:00 PM

Thank you very much Milton for your most welcome comment on this penned sonnet of mine.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/30/2015 7:59:00 PM

nicely done :)

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/1/2015 3:26:00 PM

Thank you very much Debbie for your very nice comment.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/30/2015 8:58:00 AM

It is good to see a Canadian as one of the top new poets on the site. Congratulations. I am from Ontario but moved out west as a result of a long distance relationship. 22 years later I'm still smiling!

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/1/2015 3:25:00 PM

Thank you very much Richard for your beautiful and warm welcome and congratulations on this penned poem of mine. I'm from Alberta, was born and raised in Central Alberta. Never really lived abroad but have traveled throughout some of Canada's eastern provinces. Take care and wishing you the best.

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 6/28/2015 12:29:00 PM

A well-thought out poem I find compelling and passionate beyond description.

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/1/2015 3:22:00 PM

Thank you very much Ndaba for your beautiful thought out words on this penned poem of mine.