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Time Stands Still

Time slowly passes life slowly fades people grow older nothing stays the same leaves fall, trees die, just like life but never ending. the sky darkens forever in a day with each passing second worse then the last in every one forever and eternity waiting patiently time stands still will it ever end? will the pain go away? with every second a tear hits the ground but now, unlike then not blood, but tears drop by drop.... time stands still

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Date: 5/26/2009 4:50:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to see many more poems here written by you Christina. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 3:29:00 PM
Strongly written poem Christina, James
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:47:00 AM
This is an excellent submission. I like the flow of the words and the message. Welcome to poetry Soup. ~Joseph
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Date: 5/14/2009 11:37:00 AM
no not time and not you you have grown...lots of great stuff out there for you! Have heart! Light & Love
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:41:00 AM
Christina, beautiful poem. Welcome to the soupland. I have a featutred poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 5/8/2009 3:10:00 PM
thanks you guys. :)
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:54:00 PM
well written, strong emotion too. suffering like all things has its own time, but it comes and goes like seasons. :) it is never forever. --madison
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:17:00 PM
Well written poem about suffering. It touches the heart. It does seem like it can go on forever. But this too will pass
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:55:00 AM
a geat written poem, sometimes it feels like our suffering will last a life time but sunshine always follows the rain, sometimes it feels like groundhog day and things seem so grim but the sun will still shine, I trust God in all things and even in the darkest of the dark he always shows me his little spark, it does feel like time stands still but our timing is different from Gods' timing but all will be reaveald, God bless you from diane
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