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Time Stamps In the Sand - Collab With Darren White

Aimless foot prints mark a wind torn shore deserted rifts splitting a secluded scene, (where romance rocked a heart between painted paradise and realness once adored) our heads inevitable drift even deeper inside And as blood red curtains paint a choppy sea where last sun rays die a temporary death, (so wondrous how they hold their breath to pat one later on the back with glee) even shallower time stamps left by our feet Everything erased a minute after we passed by incessant and unrelenting a water without feel, (your hand in mine, I bend over and steal evening breeze kisses, almost shy) and find myself in you a place to hide An uncertain future held without hope washed away shores with unfulfilled dreams, (but because nothing is as bad as it seems with you by my side, I can certainly cope) together our spirits and lives are complete Darren White Tim Smith

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Date: 1/20/2017 8:20:00 PM
wow what can I say, its great, fav it....Seren
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Date: 1/20/2017 4:26:00 PM
WoW! Tim you and Darren did an amazing job. It was sooo romantic. It had a nice flow as well. I agree with Chris, it is as though it was written by one person. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-)Alexis
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Darren White
Date: 1/22/2017 8:49:00 AM
We worked on a seamless poem, I agree Alexis. Writing with Tim is wonderful, he is a great poet :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 4:31:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis...Darren sent me something and I just followed his lead. He is great to write with.
Date: 1/20/2017 2:37:00 PM
Very beautiful well woven poem, great collab Tim and Darren!
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Arthur...great to see you...happy you are feeling better
Date: 1/20/2017 2:22:00 PM
Love your Love poem Tim and Darren...You create masterpieces together dear friends.
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Charma. Your poems are masterpieces as well dear friend.
Date: 1/20/2017 12:50:00 PM
Wow, what a beautiful and feel good poem from two of my favorite poets. This is seamless guys, it is written beautiful and the stanzas are as if written by one person. Congrats to both poets.
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thanks Chris, and what Tim says about me, is true about him! I was awed to be able to write this together with Tim :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 12:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Chris. It was blessing to write with a talented poet such as Darren.
Date: 1/20/2017 12:45:00 PM
wow what a wonderful uplifting ending to your poem guys - a beautiful collaboration Tim and Darren that flows in time with the tide:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 12:50:00 PM
Thanks so much for your beautiful comment Jan.
Date: 1/20/2017 12:41:00 PM
Great poem . Well done! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Heidi. Darren has some wonderful ideas.
Date: 1/20/2017 11:06:00 AM
I love this poem we created together :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 11:11:00 AM
:) And thank you too!
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 11:10:00 AM
It is awfully good...Thanks again for the inspiring lines

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