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Time Passes

I will hang on, not let time escape
I just do not have the strength of will
Yet seasons vary, it feels unreal
Time passes as the moon changes shape
I found your toys and the old red cape
The love is still there, no hands to hold
I wanted to see you growing old
Time passes as the moon changes shape
People just do not understand me
My time does not pass as the moon changes shape

©Holly P. Moore
   November 2012

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  1. Date: 3/21/2013 8:33:00 PM
    I am so sorry for your loss Holly, this is an absolutely beautiful write, my heart breaks for you. I do understand, Hugs, Bernard

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:19:00 PM
    Holly, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 3:06:00 AM
    I know this feeling well, be strong even though it doesnt feel like it, sometimes those feelings can be your enemy, hang on to the good times dear Holly, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:08:00 PM
    about your poem: your poem is very sad, I have a lost one dear to my,,, at first i did not know how to let go...you are right no one will ever understand.. not even the ones who've been down this same road... your words are deep, and visual tears... always~ your friend~ PD

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:06:00 PM
    Hi Holly, are you around right now... I will be here for 30 minutes... pd

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:17:00 AM
    Hollly much better as free verse, it flows well...David

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 6:02:00 PM
    so sad...i like the references to the moon changing shape. it works very well...

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 4:21:00 PM
    devastato! I feel your pain, sister!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 9:56:00 AM
    soup mail....