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Time Passes

The wind whipped The child spoke The slipper fell They called her simple folk The tire screeched The moment passed Long forgotten Hidden in the past The painting glowed The figure moved The light of life Impressions of food

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/19/2022 5:32:00 PM
Hi Lynn See what happens when you remove the 'The' word at the starr of each line.
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Date: 6/18/2018 1:13:00 PM
This is simply brilliant
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Date: 5/8/2018 2:42:00 PM
This is fast-paced, and interesting. Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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Lynn D.
Date: 5/8/2018 6:15:00 PM
Thanks.