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Time Lost Eyes

Sitting all alone Sitting pondering time Time I can't get back Time travel is impossible Impossible is but a state of mind Impossible until it's possible Possible to rise Possible to think Think beyond here Think past now Now is more than now Now is the intersection Intersection between yesterday and tomorrow Intersection of logic and imagination Imagination lifts Imagination removes boundaries Boundaries set in stone Boundaries impossed by others Others not worthy Others to whom we gave our power Power that was never their's Power to change Change is inevitable Change changes everything Everything and nothing Everything is connected Connected by time Connected by thought Thoughts we ponder Thoughts thought by greater minds Minds interconnected Minds over matter Matter is not a solid thing Matter is vibrating energy Energy is not in short supply Energy is in all things Things that seem small Things thought insignificant Insignificant until they are not Insignificant teeters on possible Possible outcomes Possible compatibilities Compatibilities of opposites Compatibilities not seen with naked eyes Eyes lost in memories Eyes blinded Blinded by sad Sad Memories

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Date: 3/14/2020 5:58:00 AM
Very meaningful and true
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2020 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Simon.
Date: 12/3/2014 10:42:00 AM
Its been a long while my poetry friend. I hope you are doing well. This is a lovely piece and its a blessing to read it. Nice work..
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Date: 11/28/2014 8:11:00 PM
In my humble opinion, you didn't mess up at all, thats the best part, being creative!!!!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/30/2014 11:49:00 PM
Oh Noooo I feel like I have created a monster LOL and my fav number is 68
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 4:28:00 PM
Not a matter of creativity but rather a lack of capacity to count past 49, which means I may never get to my favorite number which is 69!
Date: 11/28/2014 4:02:00 PM
Brilliant, I agree with Justin, and like how this weaves science and logic, with emotion. I did not kn ow this form, very very interesting style.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2014 4:08:00 PM
Thanks, I messed up by one line but otherwise I like the result.
Date: 11/28/2014 1:10:00 PM
truly very beautifully crafted richard excellent style you drew this in dear pal
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Liam, with this form you never know where it will take you.
Date: 11/25/2014 9:29:00 PM
I like that you included the staggering truth of subatomic physics in this important poem of imaginative initiative Richard. Your intersection metaphor is very motivating and original. Bringing free forces together to build the unknown is awesome, although there is a price, or sacrafice for using free forces, but so worthwhile. Youre awesome with Blitz poetry...I'm looking forward to doing some Blitz work within the next few years. Xool work! J.A.B.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 7:04:00 AM
I think your mind would be well suited to the task. Thanks for this inspirational response.
Date: 11/25/2014 5:49:00 PM
Wowser, I struck gold with this one. You triumphed with this blitz form, and took me on a roller coaster of profundity and the human mind. Really enjoyed these lines "Insignificant until they are not Insignificant teeters on impossible." Even the most insignificant little fleck of dust, is more complicated than the whole of New York City, during rush hour. And yet those same tiny particles are capable of wiping out millions due to some devastating disease. Faving this one...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 7:07:00 AM
I so enjoy your responses and the thought that goes into them. Thanks Timothy.
Date: 11/25/2014 9:39:00 AM
Ow gee..its as if you're opening a lock to past memories to linger,present moments to entwine,and future thoughts to remove boundaries..Boundaries from what is yet go discover.Powerful indeed. I must have been an identical twin to you in another life..Cause all these words come rambling on my mind scrutinizing my spirit inside.To my fvs.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 7:08:00 AM
Wow, what a moving response. I am touched.
Date: 11/25/2014 9:34:00 AM
A wonderful write, Richard, so creative! I love this form and you did it so well!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 7:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Rhonda, hugs back to you.
Date: 11/25/2014 9:13:00 AM
Memories can bring back the hurt like it just happened..Enjoyed reading your work..It is best to travel forward and leave the hurt behind..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 7:13:00 AM
Good advice Sara. For me I do my best to stay in the moment, the past has had it's time and the future rarely turns out the way I imagine.
Date: 11/24/2014 3:22:00 PM
Wow Richard, this is quite wonderful! Your flow of thought carefully calculated to give poetry for thought. Your words flow seamlessly from line to line, not an easy task with this form. I loved it!#7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2014 8:18:00 AM
You are kind Connie, thanks.
Date: 11/24/2014 7:51:00 AM
I love this form. It seems to be rambling but each thought merges perfectly into the next one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2014 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Monterey.
Date: 11/23/2014 12:39:00 PM
I haven't known this form RIchard! But indeed a powerful poem n a fabulous expression n the message conveyed so easy! Great!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2014 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Upma.
Date: 11/23/2014 12:18:00 PM
As always, I am impressed by your writes Rick, a pleasure to read you. :) hugsxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2014 8:20:00 AM
Hugs back to you Casarah.
Date: 11/23/2014 11:14:00 AM
This form isn't easy to use to give a message. You make everything look easy, Richard. :) Lovely!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2014 11:17:00 AM
This is a hard form to make Coherant, I'm glad you like it.
Date: 11/23/2014 10:29:00 AM
love the clever construction of this from and the way it flows so beautifully:-) great write Richard:-) hugs jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thanks for the seven Jan.;0). It is now finished, thanks for reading it first. Hugs Rick.

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