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Time Left To Repeat

Round and round Round and round we go life after life drowned in this world we think we know past to present then back to past again lives lost but are not dead those thought dead brought back again children of the past once again go to bed for those unable to comprehend time repeats from the cradle to the grave then starts the beginning of the end despite all efforts that we gave and is then reversed never to change like a song that's been rehearsed leaving many hearts needing a mend within this cycle that seems to never end.

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Date: 11/20/2014 7:46:00 AM
Hi, Jacob, Your poem immediately brought to mind a merry-go-round. Circling, circling. But I see each new circle (day) as a blessing, One more day that God has granted me to live on His great earth until He calls me home.
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Date: 11/20/2014 6:32:00 AM
Very good write and flow Jacob! Enjoyed it! A 7 for me! :) love and light! Xxxx D.
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Jacob Frey
Date: 11/20/2014 6:54:00 AM
thank you very much the kind words are highly appreciated

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