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Time Has Carried Me

Time has carried me so close to old age Will acceptance be added to my traits Accepting comfy shoes, not latest rage Having become old__many varied weights Hobbling to a electric grocery cart Every time visit Wal-Mart, grocery Definitely does not look very smart* But time hasn't carried to cemetary What about cane or horrible walker Acceptance with time maybe be mellow Maybe even become a sweet talker Or cataract surgery_ odd fellow Time has carried me_acceptance my plea Live my life with grace and each day with glee (Chic, fashionable)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 8:16:00 PM
wow love it
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Date: 12/17/2010 2:50:00 PM
Very lovely read
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Date: 12/13/2010 7:45:00 AM
Oh you have a few miles left in you....you just need a tune up....
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Date: 12/12/2010 2:24:00 AM
Would that we all live each day with such grace, Sara. Thank you for your comment on mine recently. I wonder if you would check out my first blog posting...many blessings
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Date: 12/11/2010 3:11:00 PM
I've sampled most of these things - walker, cane, glaucoma, cataracts. asthma...on and on. But! There is something kind of rewarding in growing old. Depite cataracts and glaucoma, pacemaker, and the rest, my eyes are open, my mind free. I like your idea about living each day with glee. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/11/2010 2:48:00 PM
I agree with the good Dr. very inspiring write...with luv Michael
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Date: 12/11/2010 2:27:00 PM
Very positive and inspiring thoughts on being old, Sara. I appreciate your stand.
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