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TIME AND PLACE Spring is found in the Lowland valleys with gowan-filled braes of Scotland When the early-reaching flowers bloom in cool freshness, and The air is bracing and always new-washed-glass clean - With the Ochils in the background green, Willing us, begging us -- Come to the heather hills, please ! Around Ben Lomond, they perfume the breeze With memories of Bruce and Wallace And feel young in our face. Summer is a thousand-mile southbound road-trip heading To Yellowstone through Montana and Wyoming, With 104F degree air gushing in the vent, And dinner in the Angel Inn, where we went For a chicken smorgasbord snack And a cool six pack. Autumn is a Saskatchewan garden with leaves singing, Tenacious against a hissing wind; and clinging Above the grass, feeling the ice-chilled bite, Anticipating a coming gown of white. Winter is cold with lots of snow: Moscow. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20 August 2014 Notes: Gowan = small daisy-like flower Brae = riverbank Ochils = Ochil Hills, a lovely upland part of the Forth Valley Bruce and Wallace = famous Scots heroes in history Angel Inn is near Casper, WY Moscow - capital of Russia

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Date: 8/30/2014 9:49:00 AM
Inspiring words! Congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:55:00 PM
this is so interesting, taking us from country to country from season to season. A very inventive way to do the contest. Awesome and congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:19:00 PM
This is very different, something I always appreciate...Congrats to you..BG
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:15:00 PM
Sidney, I am appreciating your writing very much. Beautiful description rolling off your pen. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/29/2014 6:39:00 PM
I loved that I was able to be an "arm-chair traveler"......right along side ....and you paid my fare !! Thank you!!! A great trip and as always a wonderful poem!
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Date: 8/29/2014 6:21:00 PM
I like your writing, and I very much liked the way you did this; good use of rhyme and effective descriptions, a very well written piece - congrats on your win in my contest
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