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Time Potd

The air is still, you can hear Buzzing of bees, feeding on nectar And pollen of fruit trees; we Slowly walk through with gentle ease Grateful for a small measure of shade That tease by uncomplaining trees, We stop. Sit for a wee rest upon earth breast Beneath the pavilion of overhanging limbs, Dangling leaves and fragrant blooms At that moment, time runs out as the clock Keeps ticking. Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock Ceaseless beating of our longing hearts Our future naturally occurring now, Our lives are worth, but a second We see the past, present, and future The infinite and eternal nature of our soul's Bathe in a warm trance that can only belong to us 7/6/2020 Time- 8 Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by: A Dear Heart
1. time 2. moment 3. clock 4. ticking 5. past 6. present 7. eternal 8. infinite

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Date: 7/17/2020 11:11:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery, Eve! Kudos on POTD. Love and more love always.
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Date: 7/15/2020 5:49:00 AM
Lovely wording, dear Eve! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 7/12/2020 8:38:00 PM
Such elegant poetry, Eve. Wonderful musings on the classic theme of time. Well done and congratulations for the honor of POTD. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/12/2020 4:09:00 PM
Your poem embraces the joys of life and living Eve. It is beautifully composed. I see why it was honored with POTD! A worthy piece with divine imagery! Congratulations! I am saving this gem to my Faves my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/12/2020 12:32:00 PM
Eve my friend what a beautiful poem and belated congrats on your POTD, such a worthwhile and noteworthy honor bestowed on you - kudos! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/12/2020 4:45:00 AM
Belated congratulations on POTD award, Eve, for this insightful poem. Well done! Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/8/2020 6:30:00 PM
Blessings are all around us- all we need to do is take a moment to embrace them. Your thoughts caress gently around me. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. :) Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:15:00 PM
Hello, Brandy, you are always a welcome joy of sunshine. Thank you for congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 5:57:00 PM
Eve, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tania, for the congratulation . Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 2:46:00 PM
- Beautiful poem, Eve :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sunshine, for the congratulation and compliment. Hope you are doing well. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 2:44:00 PM
Hello Eve, congradts on your win. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2020 7:49:00 AM
Hello Eve, I am very proud of you. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Darlene
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene, for the congratulation. Blessings my friend. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 12:59:00 PM
Wonderful way to meet the challenge, Eve -- with POTD! Congrats! Cheers, Gershon
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Honor goes to Constance for the inspiration to write this verse. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 11:45:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your honor! Thanks for saving a spot for all of us to share your timely garden. Blessings!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:11:00 PM
Sam, thank you very much for the congratulation and the wonderful inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day............
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment dear friend. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 9:54:00 AM
Very nice! Dream-like to me. Congratulations!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sunlite, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 9:03:00 AM
Eve, back with a congrats on a well deserved POTD honor. Hugs, John
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment both now and before. Honor goes to Constance for the inspiration to write this verse. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 8:43:00 AM
Well done...Congratulations Eve on POTD...Timelesstime
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Arturo, for the congratulation. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 7:41:00 AM
Wow, a beautiful image of a precious moment shared, Eve. BIG congrats on your win and POTD!! Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:05:00 PM
Rhonda, thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Blessings to you as well. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 6:21:00 AM
Congrats Eve on poem of the day..BIG congrats as well for a TOP win in the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay, for the congratulation . Honor goes to Constance for the inspiration to write this verse. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 5:47:00 AM
Hello, Eve. You've written a piece of your self into this timeless poem. It's a contest winner and now potd. Congratulations.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jenna, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Honor goes to Constance for the inspiration to write this verse. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 5:03:00 AM
Great insightful poetic lines in your wonderful poetry! Words of beauty and meaning, a reader never ceases to be amazed and enlightened.. Absolutely, we mold time to our benefit and make life worth living with honouring past, fruitful present and promising future! So much enjoyed the read! Congratulations on your POTD honour, dear Eve! and the recognition of an outshining win! Well earned! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:02:00 PM
Besma , you are such a breath of fresh air. Thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment my friend. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 3:41:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD, Eve, well deserved.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 10:00:00 PM
Lawrence, thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment now and then. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 3:12:00 AM
Fantastic time peace Eve...now, its time for POTD!!... Congrats!! my friend...enjoy the honor...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 9:58:00 PM
^W^, thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Yes, I have to thank Constance for the inspiration to write this verse, and yes, it isn't often it comes around. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2020 2:57:00 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Eve, congrats on your win and also for POTD honours. Tom
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2020 9:55:00 PM
Tom, thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2020 4:28:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my time contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/7/2020 2:56:00 PM
You did the challenge very well.. o can you are sailing the seas...
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