Time

TIME (T)reasure every moment (I)nvest it wisely (M)ake the best of it (E)njoy all that you have Heidi Sands

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Judy Ball

Date: 11/15/2016 12:01:00 AM

Very Well Said Heidi. We should treat every moment like it was our last because it just might be. Just think, we could be taking out the garbage and get run over by the truck. One just never knows. Well Done. God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2016 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Judy.

Christy Stover

Date: 11/14/2016 11:31:00 PM

Simple and sound, the best kind of advice there is. Wonderful poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2016 7:52:00 AM

Thanks, Christy.

Constance La France

Date: 11/14/2016 8:21:00 PM

Heidi, very nice. ... time is so precious and there is never enough. ..

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2016 7:51:00 AM

Thank you. :)

Denis Barter

Date: 11/14/2016 6:14:00 PM

Short and sweet, with a good message. Acrostics are one of my favourite poetic forms, and I have written many. One which I would post, but it is too large for Poetry Soup, is based on the poem "A Garden is a love-some plot, God Wot" and I managed to use the whole poem. I did post it on Voices Net where it remains today. I write mine in rhyme. Nice to know there are others writing acrostics. Gardening is my first love next to my dear wife of 62 years! Ciao Denis.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2016 6:23:00 PM

Thank you, Denis. That sounds very nice regarding your Acrostic. I would like to read that. I appreciate your comment here tonight.

Chris Green

Date: 11/14/2016 5:26:00 PM

Perfect timing on this one Heidi. :) Nice acrostic my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2016 5:49:00 PM

Thank you Chris :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/14/2016 4:32:00 PM

wise words indeed Heidi ... we never know when the clock will stop for us:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2016 4:50:00 PM

Thank you , Jan. :)