Time

Can you hear the rhythm of the time travel? Do you feel the sadness from the voice of its crying babel? Or did you see the terror when it uncovers its beautiful naked veil? Well, don’t look back! You can’t find anything in the same! Like a broken mirror with a thousand curse of pieces to blame! Dare you to look through back, You will see and you will shake, See, don’t look back to find out the mystery of the dark! Let’s just remember the time and Remember that you are alone! Just like me, like a colorless stone!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2016 12:44:00 PM

Robin,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

John Fleming

Date: 9/4/2016 1:27:00 AM

Welcome to the "Soup", Robin. Enjoyed your poem! An unusual theme delivered in an intriguing manner. My best regards! :) john

Robin Hd777
Date: 9/5/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thanks for the well wish. You too.

Skat A

Date: 9/3/2016 8:54:00 PM

Robin HD777, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Robin Hd777
Date: 9/5/2016 3:43:00 AM

Thank you for keeping the tradition, I will pass the smile too. And as a new one, take my warm wish and a friendly hug.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2016 5:10:00 PM

Grief needs its darkness to heal. Slowly that veil will lift. I enjoyed your creative poem Robin. Wishing you a warm welcome to Poetry Soup. I am very busy caring for my four year old granddaughter, so please understand if I take some time to respond to comments. Aloha, Connie ; ) 7

Robin Hd777
Date: 9/5/2016 3:38:00 AM

Thanks for the warm welcome. I wish a smooth understanding with your granddaughter. :P

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/3/2016 4:39:00 AM

Time, is a great theme to write about...your poem brings a new POV! Enjoyed it. Sunita :)

Robin Hd777
Date: 9/5/2016 3:36:00 AM

Thank you for your comments. As newcomer its great to hear from yours. :)